I have not been writing for several years and with a disability and having difficulty navigating the site. I have had a name change which needs to appear in the copywrite at the end of each new story. any suggestions? regards. Allan
Shaman, Quite nice. I give it a 5. Jayson
You would enjoy "ONENESS"
I am having a hard time jetting anyone to review it.
You would understand it.
enjoy the day. J.
Summer, I am a newbe and certainly not a good reviewer of poetry But I did get the message,"do nothing" and understand it"s value.To really do nothing when there is a storm in the mind permits the otherness to produce a resolution. Please if you would review "otherness" my 1st entry. You may understand it. Thanks, Enjoy the day, Jayson
Stric, Wonderful, wonderfull, Turn on the bubble machine. A nail on the head piece of work.
The word is never the thing and the description is never the described. I do like it indeed.
If you would please read my "ONENESS" Thanks, Jayson in Fort Lauderdale
Holly, I never studied anything about writing but I do see that this is fine writing. I like your style and the sensitivity of the story. I have had only one review so should you get the chance do take a look at ONENESS. Thanks, and enjoy the day Jayson
A. E. I am new myself and have never had any training so it is not easy for me to find detailed errors. It reads like a perfectly good book off the shelf. You are a writer. Like the cliff hanger. Enjoy the weekend. Jayson
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