Jayson's (jayson727) Reviews

Jayson

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#4654443

Review of Technical Support Forum

Review by Jayson

Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

I have not been writing for several years and with a disability and having difficulty navigating the site. I have had a name change which needs to appear in the copywrite at the end of each new story. any suggestions? regards. Allan

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#3876893

Review of Shaman's Trance

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Shaman, Quite nice. I give it a 5. Jayson
You would enjoy "ONENESS"
I am having a hard time jetting anyone to review it.
You would understand it.
enjoy the day. J.

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#3875377

Review of Waiting

Review by Jayson

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Summer, I am a newbe and certainly not a good reviewer of poetry But I did get the message,"do nothing" and understand it"s value.To really do nothing when there is a storm in the mind permits the otherness to produce a resolution. Please if you would review "otherness" my 1st entry. You may understand it. Thanks, Enjoy the day, Jayson

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#3875085

Review of Words vs. Actions

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Stric, Wonderful, wonderfull, Turn on the bubble machine. A nail on the head piece of work.
The word is never the thing and the description is never the described. I do like it indeed.
If you would please read my "ONENESS" Thanks, Jayson in Fort Lauderdale

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#3874795

Review of Final Waters

Review by Jayson

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Holly, I never studied anything about writing but I do see that this is fine writing. I like your style and the sensitivity of the story. I have had only one review so should you get the chance do take a look at ONENESS. Thanks, and enjoy the day Jayson

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#3874638

Review of Iridescence

Review by Jayson

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A. E. I am new myself and have never had any training so it is not easy for me to find detailed errors. It reads like a perfectly good book off the shelf. You are a writer. Like the cliff hanger. Enjoy the weekend. Jayson

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#3874397

Review of Art

Review by Jayson

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I do like this, indeed it is a work of art, insightfull and without a doubt true. Your good future is in your hands. Jayson

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#3874395

Review of Our Last Hope

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

Full flowing with no wasted wording. Sounds like a writer in the making.
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