I have to say I was so very fascinated with your story. I appreciated the parallels and interpretations you gave to the 2012 prophecy. I was also very excited when I got to the point of the military rescue and found that you were going even deeper and longer. Even though your story has a basis in current events and, correct me if im wrong, biblical philosophy I still loved your angle and take on putting them to story.
Thank you so much for the story and I would hope you have plans maybe write further whether from this genre or another.
Thank you so much for allowing this to be read. I actually teared up even though I thought the mysterious stranger might come back to do something noble to help out Em's mom. I appreciated the way you developed Emily and her viewpoint that was so much the classic child's view point. This is from someone with four kids so I loved it that much more.
thanks again.
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