I absolutly LOVE it. MORE MORE MORE is all I have to say. Have you written another chapter? The ONLY thing that I would change is....please add more chapters!!!!! Your writing is marvelous. I am not an expert but I know what I like to read and this is DEFINETLY something that I like. Have you ever read Lynn Kurland? I am adicted to her writing, and I am pretty sure that you could be right up there with her! Please continue to write!!! I KNOW you could get published, maybe you already have, if not you should TRY!!!! Continue to paint your pictures with your words!!!!
jenny
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