i like this so far....im enjoying the pace of the story and im already in the story. Very strong characters. i found myself searching for character images, though (physical descriptions). All the other description and imagery is presented very well.. will check back to see the finished product.. august
i am a statup woodworker's apprentice... a carpenter really, and i completely relate to your expressions here. i recently wrote a poem which i will soon display called "Am I a Poet". I wrote this poem with a similar uncertainty as I think you have about your writing.( if Im mistaken please let me know).. i often have the same uncertainty when i think of all the tools and experience i need to azquire to achieve my mastery of carpentry.. we are woodworkers if we create and we are wordworkers if we express.. keep it up. ill be watching for your "finished works".
-august
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