I love this it's amazing, I was totally hooked from the very beginning!!! It is a totally new concept that I'd never really heard of before but I have really enjoyed reading it and will be continuing to read it as I have found it very relatable even though I couldn't possibly be in that same situation. It seems like the type of thing my friends and I would love so will definitely be recommending it. Well done!!!
I enjoyed reading this story, I loved the twists and turns within it and how it shows that as humans we constantly make mistakes and remake them even within our own lifetimes. It seemed to be almost a lesson for us in the future and how not everything is trustworthy. However it seemed almost a bit rushed and I think that it could have been almost more spaced out like for example a 3 years later. But overall, an enjoyable read, well done.
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