Very well written. . . But, it seems like your perched atop a distant corner and have collected all of these facts, set your opinions to them and arranged them in a nice, neat little package. There's no heart in it, and your not bringing anything new to the table. It comes off as an outlined, summerized book report. It reminds me of those bland opinion papers from politically correct magazines we'd have to read in school, then have to write our own opinions and summaries on. Try to write about something more personal where you can really dig into the ART of expression, as opposed to something so black and white.
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