Love it! I really like how your poem leaves a lot to the reader's imagination and own assumptions. I don't think art needs to be so black and white and explain everything to the views from head to toe, but simply be there and let it touch people however it does individually. I write like that a lot of times and my reviews usually tell me to add more information, make it longer, give more as to the background of the story. I don't like to do those things all the time and this poem you wrote is a good example of how you can write a beautiful piece with so much meaning without much explination. Great job!
Awesome poem! Loved the flow and word choice you used to describe a ghost in limbo. There was not much to let the reader know how the person got in this position or where they are going afterwards but it works because even though knowing those things would help the reader and add more to the poem, it is more of a flash of that limbo time period and is a good peom without the added information. Good job. :)
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