This poem was just amazing. I love the way you wrote this Moesha. I'm not sure if you have a child or not but this warmed my heart and made me feel really bad. I feel so sorry for this child, he deserves a father in his life, but thank god that he has a wonderful mother in his life to provide and take care of him. I have mad respect for whoever this poem was about.
I like this. I love how you it was so tense when I read this poem. I also love the way the poem was formed. It was a great way to keep the poem clear. and not let anyone get confused by it. My favorite line was, "The vengence of whip torturing to death with a hateful heart." It was such a beatutiful line to me for some reason. Great job !
Haha this poem was funny but disturbing at the same time. I liked the form that the poem was written in. I wouldn't have chose to write a poem about farts but this was hilarious. You had a very good choice of words though.
I really enjoyed this poem. The choice of words were amazing. I can relate to this so well, forever is just a word. My favorite line was, "Our friends come and go. Our nights turn to day. Our laughs turn to tears. Nothing can ever stay."
This poem is really good. It shows alot of emotion in it. Its really sad at the same time though. I wouldn't have wrote a poem about death but some people feel different then I do. Overall this poem was amazing, the choice of words were good and I really liked it.
I can relate to this poem so well. It may be a bit depressing but when I read this poem I felt alot of tention. I understand how this author feels and I can also understand how it feels to feel so along and not to have anyone but knowing you really do is the worst. I know exactly how it feels to want something in life so much but you know it'll never work because of the things that you have done in your past.
This poem is really good and has a nice choice of words. My favorite line of this poem was "Rebuked by the beautiful." I don't know why, but it just was. I also loved how this poem was organized and the first word had the true meaning of the poem.
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