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I will be honest in all my reviews. I will give you both good and negative feedback, and I will not hold back on the truth. My main goal is for the author to take my feedback and mold it into ideas on how to better their writing.
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This might be composed in the free verse format, but it surely also details the freeness we feel with Him. The light that radiates from Him and shatters the darkness that threatens to put us out from Him is life changing. I've gone through those periods where I have no idea what to do, and even when praying is not on my mind, it's what I know as an instinct and is a refuge.


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Review of A Poem About Time  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this piece! It conveys how time truly plays a part in us navigating through this crazy thing called life. I would even add to it something about time being intertwined with patience, as the phrases of "be patient" never conveys a time frame.
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
As an Orthodox Christian myself, this is a beautiful piece. So many people have converted to Orthodoxy, and yet still so many still are not aware of the beauty that awaits them that is the Orthodox Church. Her history throughout the years connected with the beautiful expression of Theology and Scripture make it the perfect way to devote worship and love to Him.
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Review of Why I Joined WDC  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
These stories are always so awesome to read, no matter what community it is. A lot of people do not realize that it is more than just the content that will mean a lot, it's the friendships that are made. And not too many also realize that when the friendship can go in person by meeting up, it makes it even more special. This is a piece that I truly enjoyed reading because it celebrates the success of the site and also the lasting impact on friendships. Thank you for sharing this.


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Review of Accept  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
General Overview: I think we can all say that from the time that this piece was written, society has changed in the overall structure of functionality, and even more so by what it accepts. Political views have grown and shrunk, pandemics have affected the every day operations of a community, wars have come and gone. Schools are having to change how they safeguard daily classes, and even your car will yell at you for speeding. This piece boils down the everyday acceptance we have, whether we choose it or not.

Spelling: I see no issues with spelling in this piece.

Structure: It doesn't follow a paragraph style setup, but for the topic and the desired effect, it punctures just right.

Personal Thoughts: "You no longer live, but simply exist; physicality your prison.
You accept." How true is this sentence. The days where one wakes up and struggling to get up out of bed, but does it because it is a routine that they know.

Great work.
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Review of Thirteen Creeks  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Solid piece of writing, had my hair stick up for a bit towards the end. ;)
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A fun yet creative way to explain the basics of WDC!

Write On!
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Review of The Promise  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Nice! I loved how you kept the rhyming going, rather than be like me, and let your mind wander with something that sounds good! Continue to Write On!
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Review of Baby Girl  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful! I am very sorry to hear about your cat!
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Review of Fade Away  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed it immensely!
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Review of Bindings  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A Grand Piece of Writing! Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed it!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved it! You nearly had me die from laughing! *Bigsmile*

Thanks for Sharing, and Continue to Write On! *Smile*
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing with us!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Loved it!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Piece of Writing! I enjoyed it!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
**Star* First Impression*Star*
I really got me hooked with the descriptions and the pictures. The Parts with Bianca are my favorites, and I absolutely loved it.

*Star* Imagery and Character*Star*
I was able to visualize the story and get a good picture. The Characters are well rounded, and I love the fact that you provided pictures, so that was definitely a plus.

*Star*Suggestions and Comments*Star*
Pictures should be listed for all characters.

*Star* Overall Impression*Star*
The Part where Bianca sticks Jake in to her shoes, and takes him to school. Also where He is being shrunk.

~JesusFreak95
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Review of My Psalm  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful! Glory to God on The highest!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great Job!
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Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wonderful Piece of Work! I used to be able to sit down and write like this, but no more. My emotions were actually getting involved the more I read.

How long did it take you to write this?Also, I noticed through out, I noticed this acronym:EXT . Is this supposed to mean Extension? I had to ask, as I felt like it was vital to being able to get the whole story.

Continue to Write On!
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Review of Useful Software  Open in new Window.
Review by Glorify Him Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Will keep this in mind!
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