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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This story is very good, the dialouge is great. It's so real it makes me think to myself, what war is like. You are very talented, I'd read more if you had it. You should continue it, make him go through war all the way till the end. Let him go home to his family, and be awknowledged by the community on what he did. Good job
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is amazing, I want more. You are very talented, I think you should continue this. I feel it can become something big, a novel, movie, or tv show. I would watch it.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like the tom sawyer grammar, it's a great story man. A few errors, nothing to serious.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This story is amazing, the content is great.
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