Well I must say that this was definitely an interesting short story. I was just in a situation like that as well but I didn't have a significant other. You did truly hit that feeling right on the nose though. Descriptions were really good and your choice of words were dicey but very well placed most of the time. GOOD JOB!!!!!
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