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Review of More at Risk  Open in new Window.
Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Jeff,

That was well written.

I can understand the art of this poem.

I used to work in the medical field and overtime was a constant for me.

Keep up the good work.

Cappy
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Review of Hopeless  Open in new Window.
Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ella,

Love the name and the poem.

I get really hopeless when the depression sets in.

This really hit home for me.

Thanks for sharing.

Cappy
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Review of New season  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sumojo,

I enjoyed reading your poem.

I believe that God exists and this just proves it.

Keep up the awesome work.

Cappy
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Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Hareem,

I used to think the same thing. That my parents knew everything.
But now at the ripe old age of 52 I know better. All my parents did
was go on their beliefs and gut instincts.

I really enjoyed reading your post. Keep up the great work. I look
forward to reading more of your work.

Cappy
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Review of Quiet Rooms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Emberly,

I have read your stuff before. I have enjoyed your work.

You are very talented in the poetry genre.

Thanks for sharing your poem.

Cappy
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Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Davina,

I think that all kids have questions about God. I also think it is because they see

things that we do not. I would like to think the majority of us have lost that gift because our

parents taught us that things just do not exist. I feel that this is where imaginary friends come

from. Or this is just a fanciful way of thinking.

You write really well. I enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up the awesome work. I look

forward to reading more from you.

Cappy
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Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Surge,

First off welcome. I truly hope you enjoy the site.

Thank you for sharing your post.

To answer your question, I am unsure if the bible can be trusted.

On the one hand I believe that the bible is a great story.

The bible's stories have essentials of wanting to keep reading it.

On the other hand I want to believe it is the truth.

The story of Noah's Ark for one because as a child I loved it.

I loved the story of the ark because it had to do with animals.

I want to believe in HELL and that is where all the psychopaths go.

Heaven is for those who live life the best they can given the ups and downs that they are dealt with.

Cappy
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Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I have been a member before under the pen name of JJDEL.

I let my membership expire due to health issues.

But I really enjoy the site and this is why I am back.

I love to have a place to go to talk about writing.

Thank you.

Cappy
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Review of Karma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Hastsuda,

I really enjoyed reading your post.

I thought it was very interesting.

It was also well written.

Thanks for sharing.

Cappy
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Review of Bio._.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome Biaanu,

Hope you like it here.

I love it.

Cappy
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Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Emberly,

Thank you for sharing your poem.

It was very personal and well written.

I do not tend to judge because I had been a Paramedic for 26 years.

Cappy
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Review of Accidental Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jag,

I thought your poem was really written very well.

I am not usually into poetry but saw the title and decided to give it a read.

Thanks for sharing.

Cappy
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Review of Mistake  Open in new Window.
Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kermit,

Nicely done.

I assume that the bottle of liquid was a type of alcohol.

Who can blame a 7 year old child?

Your cousin is the one that made the mistake in my opinion.

Cappy
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Review of You are enough  Open in new Window.
Review by Cappy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Queen,

I loved your post.

I personally struggle with knowing myself.

Knowing I am enough is a difficult process that I deal with every day.

I have Borderline Personality Disorder and Bipolar.

Keep up the great writing.

Fondly,

JJDel and Cappy, the muse
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