Wow! How wonderful to have seen love through your eyes! This is a prescious poem in the history of love! Natures little secret really struck me as a unique way to describe the nuance in a persons being that we only find if we stop to really see what's in front of us. LOVED that you brought that to mind - so exciting about love, the subtle and powerful. Your poem has moved me! Good work - great rhyme - moved along very well. Contrats - keep it up!
Laughed out loud reading your story, at first I was surprised by the simplicity of the "decision", expecting it to be so serious. Great set up - his mom. But really - when truly considered - how serious these simple decisions can be in light of their consequence. Relayed most excellently. Serious message in a light, lol context. Loved it! Keep it up, you got the stuff!
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