What a great insight. I think that this is inspirational in that it gives authors something. Even if it's crap & they're told it's crap, someone took the time. (this only applies if they gave advise, too) I liked this a lot.
I thought it was good. Insiteful and a little eloquent. (if that makes sense) butterfly's wings and sobbing goodbyes seemed a little awkward. I liked the ending. All of this crazy confusion that is frustrating now is actually wonderful and lovable and normal. What happens when this drama leaves? I get it.
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