Dan's (jnnavarro22) Reviews

Dan

Review Requests: OFF

11 Public Reviews Given

11 Total Reviews Given

1

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3963258

Review of The Skid-Mark Kid

Review by Dan

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

The title is very fitting. I like how the piece tells a story over a span of time and is fairly short in words. The entire work was interesting and I enjoyed reading it.

2

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3963242

Review of Ecstasy

Review by Dan

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

Alright. Good detail/word choice.

3

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3963237

Review of Auburn.

Review by Dan

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

So detailed! I can imagine the scene perfectly. I'd like to know more about what happened and what is going to happen next.

4

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3963231

Review of Starvation at McDonalds'

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like the brevity of it. The piece is very short and gets the idea across.

5

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3958446

Review of Ruined Life

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like how modern this poem is; it addresses a conflict that is dealt with today. However the poem is very blatant and doesn't leave much for the reader to figure out.

6

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3958438

Review of Everything is Everything

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.0)

The poem had an interesting flow. It has a unique inspirational subject.

7

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3958425

Review of I barely recognize me

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I didn't like the ending, it was so uncerimonious, and very abrupt. But the emotions in the poem were on point. I could tell how sad and empty the author feels. These emotions communicate very well to the reader.

8

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3958415

Review of Time to become a Man

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Its very simple. It doesn't have enough figurative language; I feel like this could have imporved the poem. I liked the male perspective. The subject was interesting.

9

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3958402

Review of Was It Me?

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (3.0)

The guy feels very guilty about existing. I wish there was more detail. The poem was brief and lacked imagery. The subject is interesting though.

10

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3952859

Review of Selfless Bastard

Review by Dan

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I liked the rhythm of the poem. The imagery builds throughout the poem. It is descriptive. But age should have been introduced earlier or more clearly in the poem.