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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Nice try on this one. I actually did like your writing skills on this one, but it seemed liked the whole poem was against Las Vegas! The stanzas were not conformed and this reminded me more of a paragraph than a poem. With that being said this one does have allot of potential. If you ever revise it please let me know and I will read again. I like this piece for some reason. Joe H.
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Review of Day Dawning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an awesome poem to read. It was almost flawless. The stanzas were conformed and the content fit the title nicely. There was just a few places that were a little bumpy but overall this was a great read. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the way this one started, but it seemed to get a little slow at the end. I did however like the concept of th poem and I think it has real potential. Might I suggest breaking up the poem into 4 line stanzas to keep it moving a little better. Overall still an enjoyable piece to read.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a very interesting poem. i really enjoyed the format you used to get your point across. Everything fit together nicely and seemed to work in this piece. I loved the fact that it was inspiring and I especially loved the last line. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Joe H.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
5.o on this one. This was wonderfully well written. The words jumped off the screen forming a beautiful image in my mind. I loved your articulate use of words in this one and the title was on time with the content. Overall I wouldnt change a thing. Very good job! Joe H.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice job on this one. I loved the way everything flowed together and the pattern that you used on this one. Grammar and punctuation were also very good. One or two lines were a little bumpy but overall it was an enjoyable read. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very beautiful poem. I loved the way everything flowed together in this one perfectly. The words just popped off the page for me giving me a very nice visual. All the stanzas were conformed correctly and the punctuation and grammar was good as well. Very good job and keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Cubed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was well written and flowed together nicely. All the stanzas was conformed and the title was on topic with the content. Overall this was a very good piece. A few lines had an extra word or two I thought but was still a very good read. Keep writing and keep up the good work.

Joe H.
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Review of Love Daggers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This was a very good poem. First off, I loved the way the stanzas were formatted, very nice. I also liked the way the stanzas flowed together and everything seemed to fall in place, and I loved the visual I got from reading this one. Overall I think this is a very good piece. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Rites  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was awesome. I loved everything about this one. How the stanzas flowed together nicely, the content and rhyme scheme and especially your use of words in this one. Wonderfully well done. Overall I dont think you should change a thing. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this poem. The content was on topic with the title and your vocabulary and use of descriptive words were outstanding in this poem. I love the format you used and all the stanzas flowed together very nicely. Over all this is a very good piece. There was a line or to that I though could have used an extra word or two like the 6th line "Sweeping all that comes in way" I think it sounds better wit "Sweeping all that comes in it's way" but still a wonderful write. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of My Epitaph  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
That was a nice little epitaph, dont know how well it would fly in reality but still very thoughtful. Good Job, this one made me think "What If"! I just wish it could have been a little longer so I could have kept reading. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Wanna Kiss You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Let me start by saying I loved this piece! As a person who is from the city and part of the urban culture and community I reconize your slang in this piece. I would suggest changing them to read correctly as different slang words such as MA have different meanings in different regions. For example up north it means woman, but in the south it means momma. Two VERY different people. This is a very good poem and I would like to see it have the spotlight it deserves. I would have gave it a 5 if not for the slang! Please keep writing and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Come Back, Baby!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this was a wonderfully written Poem. I loved the stanzas conformity and the overall flow of the poem. I also sensed the emotion in this one. Very good job, there were one or two sentences though that were a little rough but this was an enjoyable piece to read. Keep up the good work. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of That someone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the concept of this one but the rhyme scheme was different in each stanza! I would have liked to seen more conformity in this piece. It was well written and seemed to be well thought out. Overall you done a good job, keep up the good work and keep writing. Joe H.
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Review of Nights with May  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This gave me a good description and feeling of being outside. Very good job depicting your picture on this piece. It was a little bumpy in a few places but not many. Overall still a good piece. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved it! This is the second poem I have read of yours and I have to be honest I am impressed. This was a wonderful poem, I loved the visual I got from this one. Very well written and depicted. I wouldnt change a thing on this one, it is perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work and I will continue t read more of your work. Joe H.
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Review of Splinters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was a nicely written piece. All the stanzas conformed and they flowed nicely. I did get a sense of emotion on this one, good job conveying that as well. I am not sure splinters is a good title for this poem. I see how you incorperated into the poem to make it work, somehow it just didnt fit me me (The Title Alone, Not The Poem). Overall very good job though. Joe
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this one. It flowed nicely and has a good vibe to it. I actually could invision the woman in this poem coming to life. This was very well written and creative as well. I loved how in the first stanza the woman wasnt the most beautiful woman, but her essence was what was powerful. Once again good job! Joe H.
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Review of Heavy and Lite  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed where you were trying to go with this one it just seems that your words and descriptions got a little bumpy along the way. I do however like the rhyme scheme you used and I think this poem has alot of potential. Please let me know if you make any revisions on this one. Joe H.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very good description on this one. I got a very clear image in my head of all your words. Very well written as well. Your stanzas stayed consistent and on time. Overall I think this is a good piece. Keep up the good work and keep writing, Joe H.
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
That was a very heartfelt and warm poem. I really liked how everything came together in this piece. I think the content was on topic with the title and I think this was a well written piece. Overall very good job. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Joe H.
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Review of In Dreams I See  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem, you did a very good job with the scheme on this one. It all fit together nicely and smoothly. It was also very well written and enjoyable to read. In my opinion leave this one as is, i did not see anything that needs changing. 5.0 from me on this one, keep up the good work. Joe
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In affiliation with The Art Shop  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good job on this one. I really enjoyed the people in this one and how you brought them to life. I also like the storyline to this one, it seemed to be right on track with the title. Overall this was a well wriiten piece. Keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Review of Paradise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was very well written and your emotions came through the words. The content of the poem was relevant to the title, and the stanzas flowed together nicely. Overall I gave this one a 4.5. Well done and keep up the good work.
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