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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good. The only thing I'd change is the format. the format was hard to read. But the story was really good. I'm hoping for more.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Review by Joe Schmoe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this one. But i suggest that you make the opening more engaging. I wasn't that interested after the few sentences but i kept on readina nd ended it up liking it. But others may read this and not continue. So i would advice making the opening more engaging. Good otherwise.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was really great. Although I suspected the ending the way the story was set made me completely dive into the story and forget. Although I felt that you made conner too vampire-like to just simply turn things around the way you did. But I really did enjoy it. Just a little to work on but great.
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