Very creative--I love that we can almost taste the plot though the story is just getting started. Brilliant writing and description; I could visualize the characters and their interactions in my head. You are a wonderful writer; keep up the good work~
Love your creativity. And the names--I though that it would be the other way around upon reading it, but that was a really nice twist...great beginning! Although sometimes you switch between tenses, this has a lot of potential. Keep up the good writing!
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