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Review of Waiting  Open in new Window.
Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hmm, I would say that this is written fairly well. But lacks, to me at least, any particular impression. I would say that it seems, simple, neither remarkably good or bad. I find no fault in it, and I believe you've conveyed the meaning well enough. I can rate it on lack of fault, but am unable to on merit I'm afraid. I hope you do not mind my candidness.
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Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You were right, it was interesting.

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Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
I'm sorry, you've lost me, Star Wars Rebels? no sir, no.
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Review of No Easy Way Out  Open in new Window.
Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
I think some of the sentence structure should be worked on in parts, and a few typos which I'm sure you can find. Overall an interesting story.
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Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm not a very good judge of poetry to be honest, though I can say that I understood it's meaning and felt something of what, you as the writer, were trying to convey. As I said I'm not a great judge of such things, though I can confer that I did like it.
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Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved it, I love poetry, and I really wish I could write like this. I feel I lack the experience and vocabulary to accurately describe, and do justice this piece, alas I don't read enough of poetry to give you a good review, but I can at least say that it made me feel, and that is what poetry has always meant to me, it not only makes you think, but allows you to feel.
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Review of Cute Guy Tim  Open in new Window.
Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have to say that was well written. But for comedy the obvious intention is to make the reader laugh, and well done, I found it delightfully entertaining and you made me giggle a fair amount. I can't really point out any flaws as I didn't see any. But, I'm a novel person myself, and if this interesting perspective were ever put into a character in such a novel, filled with interesting stories and funny antics such as this, I would very much enjoy reading it as well.
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Review of The Night Terror  Open in new Window.
Review by Gordon Zany Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (2.0)
Oh, that had an eerie feel to it. I'd say you have the right idea, though you may be rewarded if you tried rewriting it, there was a lack of detail that I would personally have enjoyed, the small things are what, to me, help create the larger picture, even in a short story.
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