Ooooohhhh! This is a good story! I love it! It reminds me of a relationship I had with someone. Very similar indeed. I like the way the story almost immediately pulls you in. And by the end of it, I was definitely wanting to know more. You must continue on with this.
This is an excellent poem! I love how it touches on every day life, as well as religion. It really makes you think about your life and how you live it. It's also the perfect length. Not too long or too short. It really jumps out at you once you start reading it as well. It hold the readers attention. Nice work!
This is very good! It can be very difficult to say goodbye to someone. I recently went through the same thing. But we do just like you said. We smile, we move on, and maybe one day on the future things will be different. Only time will tell, and it can be exciting thinking about it. You put your thoughts into words quite well.
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