Sharpe as a Tack's (julietsharpe) Reviews

Sharpe as a Tack

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23 Public Reviews Given

23 Total Reviews Given

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#4110853

Review of The Second Lily-Chapter One

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Spell check

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#4105100

Review of Touching the Hand of Fate (2nd Place)

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Perfect. Loved it.

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#4105095

Review of The adventure of the little egg

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (2.0)

Try separating it into a few separate paragraphs to make it easier to read. Need some major work on spelling and review some grammar.

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#4102636

Review of "Boots of Bellfonte"

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This was so cute! I love how its told from an animal's point of view instead of a humans. most people don't realize it but animals have thoughts too. I have always wondered what goes through their heads but we may never find out! Go through and check the POV and your hes and shes again and it will be perfect!

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#4102628

Review of I Know A Girl

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

I loved how the narrator was talking about herself when I expected it to be some boy who crushes on a girl until it becomes unbearable. Hiding within oneself is a topic hard to reach but you describes it beautifully.

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#4102489

Review of I'll See You Around

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

This was a gift to the world of poetry. It's a stream line from someone's conscious and I can feel what the narrator feels. I understand his pain and his struggle to let go. The layout/rhyme scheme was creative because it wasn't a constant A/B/A/B or even a A/B/C/B/A it was not perfectly rhyming. Nice Job!

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#4102484

Review of Promise of Hope

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

This was so inspirational. I have never had family problems like that but they sound difficult and exhausting. You struggle so much yet you still believe God has a plan and that he won't leave you. Your faith is so stron gin the Lord and I admire that.

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#4102294

Review of A Fool Out Of Me

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Wonderful! Loved the metaphors! Genius! I like the double "identity" guy. your vocabulary is on point. I loved it! Do a quick grammar check and it will be perfection. The character build was amazing. A true detectives mind is shown through Lisa. 5 stars.

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#4102292

Review of A New Story

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

this story is pretty genius. I love the emotion added from her own missing son.

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#4096290

Review of Listen To The Rain

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This poem was amazing! You are such a talented writer! This was by far the best poeo I have read on this site!

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#4096288

Review of Mad, Mad Resolutions.

Review by Sharpe as a Tack

Rated: E

| (2.0)

Try changing up your adjectives and adverbs every once in a while. Using the same word multiple times to describe something can bring down the creativity of a story.