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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked it. I think the introduction might be done differently to hook the reader sooner? I just mean it didn't hook me right away (it may for others, its just me). After that I think the story moved along nicely. It was entertaining and gave me something to think about. I am the mother of two and the grandmother of two. You are right, WE do go into it without really thinking about it! Most of us anyway! Thanks for a good read.
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