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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (2.5)
It's right. It's what small arguments are all about. But, what I would like to say that a little more drama could be added. If one reads it as an interesting read than it is not. Very plain. Though am argument is very well described still it will not hold readers interest.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Well I don't believe what I just read. Good work. It shows what variety of talent there is on writing.com. The topic was funny but, well described.People write such master pieces on such wierd topics is really hard to believe. Keep writing and keep improving. Good luck.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Too good man. When I read your work I felt that I stand on where.I thought me entering the contest but, lo! I have already lost it. I am really so impressed,I wish you could just feel what I felt on reading it. Very ,very beautiful use me words have been made by you. Good work!!! Keep Going.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for sharing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey there,
This is the first time I am giving a review on a song. You have given a very nice message(let down the guns, let the dove of peace fly, a place where freedom is everyone's right) along with the christmas song.
Now, the first part of the song contains three paragraph and them a chorus while the second part has just two paragraphs. If you can increase a paragraph and not repeat the last one twice it will seem more beautiful.
It's only my opinion you are free not to like it.
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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I read your story and found it good . But, I will be honest . Though it was good but, not extra ordinary. I hope later on it will show it's uniqueness, after all it is just the first chapter. Secondly, without offending you I would ask you to spell check your work. I too do it because me my bad spelling.Hope to read more of your work.
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Review of The Cowhand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well it is written very beautifully. The begining was very good. It seemed to be a story in words I had never heard. But, after the first paragraph the story said something very different. You have given very fine details describing the nature and the feelings of a cowhand who doesnot want to leave. Good Work!!! After winning the competition, I think there is little left to say.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It is really kind of you to share this useful peice me information with all Writing.com members. I came to know about hoaxes today. Another thing which I found useful was creating was creating an invalid screen name in the begining. Even I have removed myself from the mailing list many times. I never knew it was a trick. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Since the time I signed-up on WDC, I was wondering what is a citem link.Though smilingsonali helped me out with the bitem link. But, till now I could not figure out what was a citem link was. But, thanks to your note ,I think now I know about all the links. Why don't you post this link note to all the newbies . It will be a great help.
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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well it's good. I would request you to visit my portfolio and see my static item I wish I was the air. It's very similar to this gazal of yours. Though mind is in the form of a poem. Please let me know your views on it.
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Review of ROSE: a ghazal  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your gazals in english sounds great. Well this is my first experience to read gazals in english but, I am sure you are the first one to do it. It's like giving a english word to shayari so, that the people of other lingo's can also taste the sweetness of it.Great work! ! Keep going.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Superb!! Very nicely written. The subject choosen is also too good. I can just praise you. Your work is flawless. As you have mentioned that the father says his son that revenge is sweet. It never was and can never be and the son discovered it himself. Keep ur the good work.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Really very good. Honestly, very good use of words have been made. The most outstanding part according to me is the way you described the plains , the kicking wind, the smell of pain in the air and then the forest storm. It was so descriptive that the images flashed in front me my eyes. Continue the good work!!
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Review of FOREVER  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a nice concept.But, the story makes sense only if it is read again after knowing that the narrator is a rock. But, tell me how many people will read it again? One more thing the rock says they led me and went back to space. A little should be mentioned as to who they are. The story in the begining is general and in the end it becomes specific. The rock has the memory of 1.25billion years and if get emotional just for one person ,whom if has described quite a bit. Apart from thgrit makes a good read.
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Review of Blessings  Open in new Window.
Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very beautiful poem. I think every parent will feel in the same way. Even though you have kept the lines simple great feel flows from it.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You are able to create a visual scene with your words. There lies the beauty of your creation. Every word describes the scene very well. One thing which I found odd is when you rhymed the second and the fourth line,it could have been better.Its my opinion you may not agree with me.
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Review of The Golden Thread  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is the truth. If you whisper than all people will give attention and if you shout and say the truth people will think you are mad.
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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is one me the most beautiful creation , I have come across on WDC . A very touching story. I feel such creation should be put in school syllabus. Every child will learn the meaning of sharing. But. Why did Mr. Ray have to die ? If could be in hospital and later on come to know about Christine's good deed. It is just a suggestion.
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Review of A Hero’s Tale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
True stories are always very captivating . God is a great story teller. While living in peace,civilians often ,forget the price which sum one has paid for there independence. This is a sweet way to honor thena. The beauty of your writing is in small and simple sentences.
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Review by barkhakariwala Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Well in very few words you have narrated long story. But, it is nice to read such simple and sweet pieces. One thing I dont get is its form.Maybe it is my poor understanding. But ,it is difficult to be put into any grade. Otherwise , it is unique in itself.Hope to see more nice work in future.
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Review of Interactive Art  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great work. It made a very good read. I found it to be very original. I never heard me such a glass room story. Though story where people walk in haunted house(and the others follow without saying heed to the warnings) is often heard of. But, yours is a fresh crop.
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