I love how this poem doesn't have an ending. There's nothing to settle on.
It leaves you 'wondering why'.
You feel the confusion the person must have felt ( or feels) and the pain of a loss of someone that has left this persons life.
Very effective :)
I'm reading my own thoughts :) , but :(
This is well written and the emotion comes through wonderfully .
It reads well and every word adds to the over all story.
I can't give any advice because it's great the way it is.
well done
This is a really great story and well rounded. The characters personality's are well defined and honest.
I love the topic of the story. Something that's real and truthful for alot of people.
II really enjoyed reading this
Kate
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