Noooooo! A cliff hanger! LOL :) I hope you continue the story, It sounds promising. Will Ludo, Didymus and Hoggle be able to accept the Goblin King's new friendship with Sarah? Will that new friendship be tested based on how her three friends intaract with Jareth? I must know!
Hi! I love Labyrinth Fanfiction!! Good story, I realy enjoyed it. My favorite was the tension you put between Sarah and Jareth, they both wanted to move forward in their relationship but were both unsure as to the reaction of the other. I look forward to reading more of your fanfiction!
Kim
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