You have such a gentle way of putting things, but by the end of reading this the poignancy of what you were saying crashed down on me like a f***ing refrigerator. With each paragraph, you start with these beautifully articulated sentences, "Death isn't something I look forward to, but it is something I don't fear in this world" and "People don’t grow old alone, I see millions of people fearing that when their dewy days will be spent by themselves"— brilliant diction, delicious bluntness. My only feedback is that sometimes your sentences go on. But there is wonderful potential here. I love it!
Haha, I remember reading The Master and Margarita for the first time after years of Checkhov and Dostoyevsky to be absolutely blown away by imagination behind the characters and its representation of the Soviet Union.
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