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Review by Kay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.5)
You do have a very good point, all though I am going to share a link with you which is about why those people don't wear masks. Many are just lazy and self-centered but some it brings back terrible abusive memories. https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/houghc/2396247...
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So many writers experience writer's block. We are mostly all guilty of it, including me. I hope one day we all; can come to a verdict that we need to just write down our thoughts. Beautiful writing. Love, Kay
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm, this is a clever poem but the title may make readers be turned off especially during our current times. It could be considered as racial profiling.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hmm, A very neat concept. I really like your word choices on the last line. On the other hand, it is missing some key-rhyming. If you struggle with rhyming (like I do) you can check out this link. https://rhymenow.com/ I hope you have an amazing Thanksgiving and I will be looking forward to reading your future pieces.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WOW! I only read about 50 but geez you are thankful for a lot! Such a great reminder to not take things for granted. Great writing prompt that is super easy to complete! I hope you have an amazing Thanksgiving and eat lots of pumpkin pie and turkey (If you aren't vegetarian lol) I will definitely find myself reading all of this eventually when I have the time.
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Review of Twenty Years  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AFter reading this, I am literally crying. I lost my best friend to cancer in 4th grade. I am so glad you fought through this journey. I hope you never have to experience anything like it again.
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Review of Intensive Care  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awh, as someone who has COPD I totally understand your wife's situation. I recommend talking to a therapist if you are still traumatized by this experience. I hope you are both doing well now!
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Review of Existing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As an unbinary myself, I found this a VERY inspiring poem.
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Review of Outlook  Open in new Window.
Review by Kay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the vision I am 99% positive you had for this poem. Although sadly, I am a bit lost. It may just be me, I'm not sure. But I like the onamonapia you used at the beginning. Overall, a bit of work needed but love the concept!
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Review of The Stone  Open in new Window.
Review by Kay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I love the story and how different it is. I did notice one common mistake though. Every piece of dialogue does not need to be like this, "I like apple pie better," said Ciara. Instead, you could like this for Some (not all) dialogue pieces. "I like apple pie better" Other than that I really like how you used descriptive words.
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