I have read your other stories so I expect a lot from you & this story as well. This little prologe seems like a great start for you new story! So, please, continue writing!
- Kaye-Anne
Absolutely spectacular! Aside from a few errors, I thought it was awesome! I can't wait to read the next & final chapter. Please hurry and finish it so I can enjoy it like I did the previous 3!
- Kaye-Anne :)
This time I gave you a 4 because, although there were a few errors, I could understand it better. This is only the second chapter so I only expect for it to get better. I look foward to reading the next two.
- Kaye-Anne
This chapter makes it seem like it will turn into a great story later. It makes me want to read the other chapters. The story is good so I would've given you a 4 but there were some parts that I didn't understand that well so I gave you a 3 1/2 instead.
- Kaye-Anne
This was pretty good. I really can't write those kinds of poems, the abecedairans. I go way off topic, but you did pretty good. I enjoyed it!
-Kaye-Anne :D
This poem gave me chills as I read. Even though it was a poem, I was thoroughly terrified for the girl. It pulled on the strings of my heart. Which is why I gave you a 4 1/2.
I remember trying to do an abecedarian poem with animals. It didn't work out xD. But it looks like you got the hang of it! (: I liked your poem because it seemed interesting even though it was only 26 lines :D
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