Touching stuff. I've had a rough spell with Religion and faith since I started High School, personal reasons and all those excuses, but I've really admired two things; the personal dedication of followers, and the acceptance of the faith for those who've meandered off the path. I'm not saying I've been re-enlightened, but you've certainly reminded me why I can't have a serious beef with religion, even after I've dropped it, :). Bravo, excellent piece of poetry, and kudos for keeping your faith together!
(And on the technical, poetic whatnot, I think you did really well, too. I'm Grammar/Diction-OCD, so if you didn't make me wince, you're doing really well. xD Keep up the good work!!) ~Kayla
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