I'm Amy and I'm a member of the"Paper Doll Gang"and i am honored to review "Hardened" .
i would like to offer you the following comments:
I liked Hardened.n The story was very well written. I love how you brought the feelings out and grabbed me as the reader into it.
Story Strength:
Your character is well described as well as where he finds himself and how he got there. Most of all i love the ending. It is brilliant.
Suggestion:
i love the story as it is.
Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
Your work is free from spelling mistakes. Awesome!
I would like to offer you the following comments:
I read all five chapters of Shades of Midnight Snow. And this review covers all of the chapters. Firstly I want to congratulate you on a well written, well thought through work. The storyline was very good and it caught my attention and kept it.
Story Strength:
The storyline is strong and the characters strongly written and well presented to the reader. One could associate and identify with the characters well. You have created a feeling of suspense and mystery
Suggestion:
I would suggest a continuation to the tale as i for one is anxious to see what happened to Anya and Dom further.
Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
Your use of punctuation and grammar is very good and so is the spelling. It was a pleasure to read this.
My name is Amy and I'm reviewing your story for the Paper Doll Gang.
I found the story imaginative and very well written. I especially loved the fact that you allowed the reader to make up their own mind what the main character was till the very end.
That created a feeling of suspense and it was quite easy to associate with its fear and other emotions. I also found your subtle criticism of what we do to the planet delightful.
It was an honour to read this story and i look forward to reading more of your work.
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Hi Yusuf 
Thank you for sharing your work.