Very interesting poem, very heartfelt and deep and haunthing at the same time. I would of changed of couple of wordsor added a verse or two more but otherwise its a great poem. I will look forward to reading more of your poems. Hopefully they will be as good as this one. Keep on writing!
Well im new on this site, so I still learning about writing and all this good stuff. But i have to say I do love this poem, While it could of been a bit deeper with the words, I did enjoy reading it. It does get to the point you try to make and reader gets what you are trying to express with your words. I hope to read more good poems by you.
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