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Review of Him  Open in new Window.
Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It was morolounge.Write another one.
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Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yea, you really should.
it was cool,
about the sarah and everthing.But thares
one slight problem,is that do Sarah has anlover
to make him forget about her or an friend.Dont take it the wrong way but add an little mo
re dtails like how te refrigerrtor look,and what she came home from.
But the story is good.So i gave you an 5.0 just
add an little more details ok!

keep on writting....
:)
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Review of Cut to the chase  Open in new Window.
Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I.....
NEVER MIND



I LIKE IT!!!

SORTA......
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Review of Bleeding Roses  Open in new Window.
Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
THARE IS SOME SPELLING THAT NEEDS TO BE CORRECT
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Review of Missing  Open in new Window.
Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
what'll happen?
WHAT'S HER NME....

I REALLY LIKE IT WOULD SHE BE FOUND
OR IS THIS THE PROLOUGE.
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER .....
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Review by k.b Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It was intresting.But i need u tell me who was the farther?
and did she ever turned 15?hmmmm........




ITS AN BIG IF TO THIS.BUT I'M NOT BEING MEAN.ITS REALLY AN NICE STORY.....


:) BYE,
SINCERLY,
K.B
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