I really liked your story it kept me interested right to the very end. I thought the dialogue and just the story in general was really well written, better then a lot of story's on here. I did feel very bad for your main character though the guy couldn't catch a break.
i like your story, the title and the first paragraph is really great, it really grabbed my attention and I wanted to find out what he had done that made the character think of himself as a coward. i like the names of the characters as well they are very original.
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