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Review of Christmas Joy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. :) It's different from what you usually write.
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Review by kerrylewter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I want McDonalds. :( i cant wait for our "projects"! :D
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Review of Trapped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
ZOMBIES! this makes me want to watch zombieland. Let's have a movie party soooon.
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Review of Dessert  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Aaron is a loser! :) write me a BOOTASTIC story
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Review of Devoted Housewife  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
BOOTASTIC!!!
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Review of Forgotten Dunes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i miss the summertime (:
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Review of BedBugs  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
(: the imagery was great! For some reason I pictured this story taking place at your house. Love youuuu *Heart*
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The imagery was great! This story definately deserved to win (: good job!
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Review of Intruder Alert  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
nice!
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Review of I am a murderer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This made me laugh. At first, I didn't see the last line and I was like What?! But I got it and I thought it was good. The story definately tricked me.
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Review of Gangsta D's Anger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dalvin! You know you're just a big teddy bear. (:
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Review of Strangers Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ally, I love you (: and this poem is great. You use good word choices and grammar. Maybe this is realistic, or maybe not. That doesn't matter, theres still a good story behind it.
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Review by kerrylewter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was probably the best poem I've read all day. I can relate to it so much. I miss my mom. Even though it has some grammar problems, it's still really good, and I think a lot of people can relate to it.
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Review by kerrylewter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the concept, but I didn't like the use of Thou. I thought the rules were good, and everything else was too, just not that one word.
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Review of Green Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Even though I have blue eyes, I liked it. I agree green eyes are pretty, and the last line was super cute. I don't like the rhyme, but overall it's good.
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Review of "The war"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really, really liked this. It flowed so nice, and your word choices are great. Normally I don't like rhyme, but it goes good in this poem.
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Review of What If . . .  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the concept of this. The questions after each stanza really flowed good.
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked how you worded this poem. You never really said who you were talking about, maybe God? I feel like whoever you're talking about, your intimidated by? Or maybe you're just nervous about meeting them. Your vocabulary was really good and your grammer was too. The mood was kind of dark and intimidating.
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