I like it when a story touches me emotionally. Now, I'm not one for serious stories usually, but this one caught my attention. You did a great job at making me feel for the character. Though, I'm not much for one who drinks his troubles away, I can see why he did. This "love story" has a different take on how things work, and I enjoyed the double element between the two.
I think that my favorite part of the whole story, though, is the last line "Kari has her mother's eyes."
It is fascinating how one can take a simple sentence and transform it into a completely different message. The feeling of loss and death is overcome by hope and love. This poem truly brings together the feeling of how some lives have been changed or forever lost. But though it has a bleak message, it truly brings out how we as people can change this new year by coming together and bringing hope into peoples lives. Very touching, and very well done.
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