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Review by CharlieB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love lyrics that tell a story or have meaning, and i believe that this song does. i would definitely listen to this on the radio. My favorite line was "That will be there on land or by the sea". so creative! I would love to hear it with the melody.
PS: i hope this boy hears this and realizes the love he's missing out on :)
CharlieB
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Review by CharlieB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this. I found myself smiling at your realizations, because i could really feel and understand you're feelings. I'm not gay, but everyone has some sexual fantasies or preferences that don't make sense to most people, so they're scared of it. What i also liked about this was that you avoided details that could scare people off, but the way you wrote made it obvious what was going on. "doing what almost every fifteen-year-old boy would do when he's left to himself with a computer and broadband." that was good.
All in all, great job!
CharlieB
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Review by CharlieB Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very emotional and felt personal (whether it was or not, it had that feeling).
Don't really have anything bad to say about it :)
Good job,
CharlieB
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