TinkerBell Lover_16's (kiera_buqq16) Reviews

i feel your aching pain. when i read this it made me think of my grandmother who died back in 2011,until this day i still cry and think about her like it was yesterday

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#3829167

Review of My Blood Red Rose

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

is she dead? Why do you love her so much?

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#3829158

Review of Prajna

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (3.0)

what caused your wombs? why don't you want help?

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#3829153

Review of High School

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

i remember my freshmen year of high school,it wasn't the best but i managed to get thru, and sometimes i still have bad days and i am a juinor in highschool!

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#3829148

Review of No Longer Here

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

great word choice! it reminds me of loosing an important person in my life!

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#3829136

Review of Hopelessness

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

is she hopeless? why? i love the way the poem is writing and your word choice!

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#3829127

Review of Come Back To Me

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

i love the introduction of the poem because it sets the tone or mood for the poem, but overall great poem

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#3829117

Review of 600-lb Streetwalker

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I love the descripitons you used and the fact that you stayed right on topic!

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#3818604

Review of Here We Go Again

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

i really liked this. but i seem a little confused when you said "Combing streets for a name I forgot to catch
Searching for a face not remembered
Looking for,
Nothing"???

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#3818576

Review of How To Break A Heart

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

oh my gosh, word can not describe how i feel about this poem! This is totally worth publishing,While reading the poem i could totally visualize the imagery. I really do recommend that all males should read this, then maybe the would understand why females are always mad when they say & do the exact samething to us!

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#3818553

Review of Love's Way

Review by TinkerBell Lover_16

Rated: E

| (5.0)

"hearts are stolen by love's affectious thieves": I can totally relate too this! Absoutely great word diction to explain the way love comes and go!