great poem! I especially love the last phrases.
One thought, and this comes from someone who just recently learned to pick up a pen/paper, so take it for what its worth. In the third phrase, it seems to me that you go back/forth between having found love and not having found love. The first sentence clearly states that one of the partners in the relationship is still in love with the other. Yet, in the second sentence it states that perhaps true love has yet to be found, and then its back to having found it in the third line. Again, just a comment. But certainly a well written poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing!
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