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Review by Katherine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem! You should try to capitalize your "I" and work on punctuation. Overall I enjoyed the suspenseful build up to the "Ball circling the rim super fast" and "the deafening roar of the crowd the buzzer sounds". I like how you said "turn up" at the end. It added a lot to the poem. Keep writing Zaeeeeeeeeeeeee you rock.
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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
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Review by Katherine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I think this was an interesting poem. I thought about it in a few different ways. At first I thought it was just about someone with a broken heart and all that cliche stuff, but then the second and third time I read it, I picked up on a few key points of the format. The first line of the stanza alludes to being buried in a coffin of some sort, and the second line gives reasoning. I really liked that because of the few poems I've read, I've never seen a format quite like that.
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