~Kinsey D. Phillips's (kinsey0910) Reviews

I really really enjoyed this! I feel the emotion, and it wasn't very long ago that I was going thru these emotions myself.

"Im screaming I'm sorry
But what can I do
Put me in your shoes
And I would leave too"

I really liked this part. You ask yourself what you would do and realize that if it were you, you'd make the same choice. Again, I have been there.

In the last section, I really connected with your poem.

"I dont want to talk
Dont know what to say
Im dying inside
As you walk away "

I have died inside myself. I could really feel the pain.

Thank you for sharing your poetry! I really enjoyed reading your work! Please keep sharing! :)

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Review of Allison's Sonnet

Review by ~Kinsey D. Phillips

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I enjoyed your sonnet. It was beautifully put together. I like the use of singing and playing music. I like the way you express your love. It is unique. Very well done! A+ in my book! :)

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Review of The Bottle of Rum

Review by ~Kinsey D. Phillips

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I really enjoyed this poem! You did a good job with this particular style. I like the imagery. I did see one place where I wasn't sure if this was an error or if you used the repetition on purpose.

"as we run away to the to the field of daisies "

You repeated "to the" and I think it sounds good repeated, but also if it weren't. I wasn't sure if you did that on purpose or not.

Thanks for sharing your work! I enjoyed reading it! :)

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Review of Untitled

Review by ~Kinsey D. Phillips

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I love this poem. The short and simple nature of it calls out to me. I can feel the emotion and the longing for your lover in your words. I especially love the strength of your final statement "I awake with outstretched arms." I can really connect to this poem, especially with my current situation! Thanks for sharing!

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Review of IT ALL BEGAN WITH A SMILE

Review by ~Kinsey D. Phillips

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I can really feel the love and emotion in this poem. I think it is beautiful!

With eyes as blue as rippling blue waters
Hair as black as glistening roads in the rain

This part was very descriptive, I could literally picture it.

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Review of IN THE MIST

Review by ~Kinsey D. Phillips

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Beautiful poem!