I love the way the poem is set up ! i like how it shows the girl in th bad relationship then her getting out of it !i love how she just becomes herself again at the end!
I like how u use the first stanze and the last one ! The poem overall good, you need to add at lest a couple of more punction it helps the reader know when you have to pause of its your complete thought.
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