WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW.....I've never been held so captive yet so delightfully disturbed. After working all day and my vision is blurry I still just had to read the whole thing. You have a wonderful play on words. You became the character and developed her quite gracefully and believably. The concreteness of your conviction and fact makes it all the more alluring.
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