Nice methapor, riding on life! It sure feels like it some times.
I think it's not bad at all, although it is a little short to say whether you are a good poet or not. Also, i don't really see the relevance of the line "tickity tock it keeps great time", but maybe that's just me.
Keep up the good work!
Klaassen
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