This is a really good start to an interesting story. I want to see what happens next. There were a few grammar mistakes, but it was still very relatable.
Wow, I would never have thought that the beginnings of that story could be that interesting in the first chapter. I really like the thought that an angel and a mortal could be romanticly involved, but I have to wonder if there are complications that thou have not mentioned yet. But thou be the almighty author, and I await your holy word.
This is so awesome, I can't believe the twists in the plot so far. Shifters? So cool. It makes me want to devour the rest of the story. I can't wait to read more!!!!
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