It was a slow but captivating start, once I started reading I didnt want to do anything else but find out how the story ended. It was obvious that it was a tragic ending but but how you arrived there was truly great. Not to be a critic because I am not one lol, but I wish i could have seen your character being developed or defined a little more. Though I did get a feel for them, I was not able to really see them, if you know what I mean. Then again this was a short story.
All in all this was excellent and I cant wait to read more of what you have written.
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