I liked the way the poem started and then slowly connecting to the sun and so on the nature.
I appreciate the way the point about littering is brought up and yes we are supposed to protect.
The ending line is put up brilliantly.
The story is wonderful and has touched me. The love between the prince and the knight is put well and can imagine how true and wonderful it must be. Very well written .
Regards
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