I'd choose Sylveon because I love all the Eeveelutions, but I could just as easily go Riolu because of how food Lucario is. Especially when you can get it to Mega Evolve.
None of them really, because I'm a surprisingly adaptable person. However, if I had to choose, it would have yo be Tellitubies. But only because the world makes the least sense.
Wow, apparently I'm in the majority. First time for everything.
My personal favourite pokémon has to be Eevee because of its ability to evolve into so many different types, therefore it can become whatever your team needs. Too bad Flareon's states don't match its move set, from what I've heard from experts anyway.
I personally think this is a good premise with some clever options. The different possibilities for what the app is capable of leads to some interesting ideas. However, if there's one thing that kills it for me, it's the sudden dead ends. I'm going down a path when I suddenly find no more chapters, not even options to continue.
Honestly, I don't really know what I expected. The title had me interested "The Weight of a Trainer", I was curious wwhat that meant. Maybe it was about responsibility? Like "the weight of the world"? But then I learned it was about fat gain. I don't have anything against it (apart from how unhealthy it is) and was willing to give it a try. The problem is, it is only about weight gain. So you get what you asked for, but not really much else.
Well, that was an interesting development. The way the genie explained it, she just had to imagine what she wanted, and it would happen. I was not expecting that just thinking of something would also cause reality to shift. The fact her power made her as large literally as she dreamt of being metaphorically was an interesting twist.
I fail to understand why this pathway up and ended after only ten chapters. Beyond that, the way that this chapter is laid out isn't very clear on if it is supposed to continue or not. We'll, clearly sonicbattler intended to end the story here, but it definitely could have continued.
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