Im not usually one for reviewing poetry, i find it hard to grasp what is being said at times underneath the words, but this is simple, with short bursts and something everyone can understand, the only problems i have is the way its layed out (which might just be the formatting), and its a bit too generic for my taste.
So i liked it, but it doesnt really stand out, its not really unique, but either way dont let anyone stop you from writing! :)
This story starts off with Claudettes emotional state, throwing you right in with her walking down the hall, making you feel that your trapped until you see the one door ajar, walking into the library and coming face to face with who she really was.
id love to read more about the other girl, where had claudette been?, why had she woken up now?
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