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Hi. I'm not super experienced with giving reviews so I stay away from technical stuff. I prefer short stories. I generally share what I liked and didn't like about the story. I usually give an example of what I think overall and whether or not it has grabbed my attention making me want more of the story. I hope to get more experienced so that I can be more helpful in the future
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Review of My Child  Open in new Window.
Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good morning Sinbad. Interesting take on parenting. You've really got me thinking. My initial feeling is that I do not agree with some of the statements in the first verse. Of course, that just means that the chosen statements have different meanings to us. I love a thought provoking read. To me, one must foster (not the right word perhaps) the ideas in verse one to allow the ideas in verse two to occur. Verse three of course, should be universal. Either perspective, I loved this. Thank for for sharing


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Review of The Chat  Open in new Window.
Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good morning! Lovely little story. I especially like your use of the prompt "chat." Very creative.
Your last line " Savour every moment she could get away with anything" leaves me wanting more. I identify with Amy, being guilty of some boyfriend sneaking in my younger years, and would love to hear about her escapades. Thanks for sharing


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Review of I HAD A FRIEND  Open in new Window.
Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Monty. I love this. The first few lines led me to believe you were speaking of another soldier. By the end, for me anyway, it was a verse to God. Either way, your words are powerful.

Truly appreciate your service to our country.
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Review of The Visit  Open in new Window.
Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good morning. Well done! Great imagery. I could see and smell the shack. I was able to feel her brother and his way his life. The ending left me wanting more. I want to hear her side of dining in a shack, rather than a mansion.

Great use of spacing. It is so much easier to read submissions with the paragraphs broken down, rather than the continuous lines in many submissions.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of The Narrow Alley  Open in new Window.
Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good morning DyrHearte.

I truly love this piece. I often write about addiction and its recovery and this poem made me feel those feelings.

Certainly not assuming that is your topic. But, you've been heard. No matter your topic I understand and feel your words. Thank you so much for sharing
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good morning. As a mother myself I feel your emotion in this letter. The description speaks volumes. "A letter to my future kids about how I would love to be happy." A mother understands that our own happiness depends greatly on our children's happiness.

editing note: Was it meant to be typed twice?
Thank you for sharing
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Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi. Turn about is fair play. I loathe aliens. No seriously though, not an alien fan, however I do enjoy a good tech enriched story. That and mystery. I was on the fence as to whether I would find myself looking for chapter 2, until I read her assignment. "Sea of Tranquility on the moon sounds great. I'll be keeping my eye out.


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Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi. What a lovely little poem that speaks volumes in just 8 lines! I myself am a procrastinator so I love the inspiration to do more. I enjoy when a poem starts off asking a question. Makes me want to read further to not only see your answer, but how it compares to mine. Thanks for sharing


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Review by Temperance Stone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kenzie. Absolutely beautiful. I too, spent many an hour drinking tea and discussing our faith with my grandmother. My Nana was a saint in my life and my entire family really. I also, had a neighbor who always welcomed us with snacks. All of the neighborhood children called he "Mother Goose." Your words were able to instantly bring me back to my younger years. I can taste the tea and hear Nana's voice. Thank you for sharing such poignant personal words. You've lifted my day.
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