Love it ! As a Marilyn Monroe fan I think this piece conveys all the things Marilyn would have wanted people to know about who she really was. You did an excellent job of describing details and important events. The mood of sadness and regret is conveyed masterfully. Great work!
I love the blunt frankness of this poem. I like the fact that you make evident how our consequences affect not just us, but the earth we live in. I love the native american mysticism as well.
I love it! To me this poem feels like you are discovering the true joy of love again. It feels just like the first time you saw your significant other and realize exactly how much they mean to you. This work of art conveys the meaning that love is a circle that will never end, but continually go on and on whether we are here on this earth or not. I liked the style really well because everything flowed and the descriptions were really great.
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